Here is the fifth poem entry by one of our aspiring poets out there.
I LOVE YOU
I-‘ve met you first in January
L-eaving a mark in my mind
O-ffer to be friends by you
V-isibly you also felt interested
E-njoying my company and getting excited
© Anonymous 11/16/2021
Y-ou told me you already love me
O-ur love gets deeper and deeper by far
U-ntil we both say “I LOVE YOU” on the altar
This is really sweet. I don’t know, but when I’d read the twist at the end, a smile was instantly drawn into my face. It’s so cute how the process of being in love will end up getting a deep and genuine relationship until getting married.
Overall, this is a really creative way of writing a poem, and you successfully added the twist at the end. Thank you so much for sharing.
What about you? Have you ever tried this artistic way of writing as what this writer did? If you’re going to share your thoughts by using a poem, what will it be? You are also free to drop by and submit your poem whenever you want.
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